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 A girl's 1000 wishes(Chapter 1.)

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PostSubject: A girl's 1000 wishes(Chapter 1.)   Sat Aug 27, 2011 10:28 pm

I'm 14. I look like your typical suburban girl...and yeah, I am. I have 1 sister. She's my worst enemy sometimes but I really love her. My name is Tracy and her name is Tabatha. Both our names start with "T" because my mom expected us both to have a special talent. Well, Tabatha can Sing, paint, and is the fastest student in the whole 8th grade. Not me. I am the least talented person in the 6th grade. I sing like a chicken, can't paint for my life, and I run so slow the school let me have an extra 5 minutes on the pacer test...no seriously...I'm not even kidding.
That's not the only thing she's better at than me. She's prettier. Her hair is super shiny, with sweet curls and is a dark-brownish color with NATURAL blonde-ish red high lights....and as for me? My hair is frizzy, not that shiny and I don't have those highlights. To make it all worse, I have glasses and thick eyebrows! Tabatha is old enough to pluck them ( so she says ) and I'm stuck with eyebrows so thick I might even have a unibrow! Okay, i'm going overboard...I love my sister and there's no reason for me to envy her. But it's just so difficult!
Oh well. Anyways, ever since I was 7 I kinda still saw Tabatha as the pretty, smart and talented one. I made a wish almost every day until the end of 5th grade. The first wish? Be able to sing like Tabatha. The rest are all wishes less selfish. So far, I checked the ones that were granted. They are getting 100's on my tests and projects, working in a food kitchen, learning how to braid my hair like Tabatha's, and convincing my mom to get me a tote schoolbag like Tabatha's...that's it.
"Tracy will you GET OFF THE COMPUTER?! I need to finish my essay!Says Tabatha.
" Losers weepers...! Can't you see I'm writing a blog?!?"
"Oh please, no one is gonna read that! Just give up already, Tracy!"
"But I already finished all my homework, and did my chores, I think I deserve some time on the computer!" I said.
"Why are you so stubborn!?! JUST GET OUT OF THIS ROOM AND GO TO YOUR FRIENDS HOUSE OR SOMETHIN'!" She yelled out.

If only she would've seen all the nice things I just wrote about her.


This is a realistic fiction story! Smile

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PostSubject: Re: A girl's 1000 wishes(Chapter 1.)   Sun Aug 28, 2011 8:34 pm

I love it!!!! Pls write more!!!! It sounds very realistic and in a way, reminds me of remona and beezus. idk why. xD
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PostSubject: Re: A girl's 1000 wishes(Chapter 1.)   Tue Aug 30, 2011 7:24 pm

lol this was inspired by another book about 2 girls living in a town where they are outcasts
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PostSubject: Re: A girl's 1000 wishes(Chapter 1.)   Wed Aug 31, 2011 11:23 am

Nice job!
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